Excerpt from The Guardian

Excerpt from The Guardian

A Story by Birsin
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A child born with a pure soul does not know o the evil residing within him. This evil may be held back by the child's purity itself, but what happens when the child prys into the darkness?

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I picked at the dark presence lashing out within me. It called my name, making me want to venture further. It promised me that I could save them, that I could help them, so I pryed at the dark. Suddenly, it burst through me, filling every cell of my being with energy, with power. I felt as if nothing could touch me. I looked at the faces of my enemies and laughed. The sound of which only frightened them more than they showed when the darkness was released. I looked into a puddle of water and saw my reflection, fangs replaced my canines and my ears were starting to have a point to them. The most frightening thing was that my irises looked like they were made of flame, parted by a slit of never endingdarkness that had become my pupils. I was truely frightening, but that did not matter, for these enemies were to pay for their crimes and I would deliver them to punishment.

© 2013 Birsin


Author's Note

Birsin
Not sure if that will make it into the book. Its a work in progress so there probly will be errors. But im workin on it. Wish me luck writers.

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Added on February 7, 2013
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Tags: Darkness, purity, fantasy, fiction, evil, redemption

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Birsin
Birsin

Tacoma, WA



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