No one was around...

i was a bit upset so i wrote this...

M y eyes went dark around me,

my feet flew off the ground,

i felt like i was falling,

but no one was around.

 

My breath got colder and sharper,

my head was starting to pound,

my voice was practically screaming,

but no one was around.

 

My lips were dry and swollen,

i couldnt hear a sound,

i felt my sanity slipping,

 but no one was around.

 

I knew it was my time now,

the darkness had come round,

all this could have been stopped,

if only some one was around...

Author's Note

sorry about spelling. xx

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

I'm reading your writing once again on your request. I respect your feelings and truly i'm very impressed because you are just thirteen... And you have a great writing. I'm sure you becomes a great write... I salute you. Thanks!

[White Ink]

oh the Chills! beautifully haunting..

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Yeah... Its truly touch my heart, i like it, i salute your feelings and also very impressed your title .... Gud luck ... Thanks!

[booh]

beautiful xx