Blinded

When people follow the crowd.

Flocks of sheep

across the land

listen up, you've delt your hand

a weak game, you've lost your chance

speak up, you little man

don't you care?

Blinded you follow

ignorance was your answer

and it spread like a religion

rotted out your flesh

and replaced your face.

you've been changed

never the same

your just one of them

in the flock of sheep

don't be controled.

and don't let go.

Reviews

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

I love how you compare people who make the wrong choices as a flock of sheep. How they ruined their originality proving to be like everyone else. I really liked this poem.

[Expression]

Nice Work :')

[Snuggles McClintock]

typo alert: delt should be spelled dealt!