Force

Rain drops on my soaked sweat skin. Heavy clothes burden within. Every force is against me now. Total angst, fearful head. Heavy Force now I'm done, let me go. The waters' edge is always unknown. It takes thee in like a hand, and shows you death from your lands. I have lost and you have won. Here I lie near the sandy shore. Where my heart once was, now is gone. Forever gone.

Author's Note

This is sort of Punishment Part II

Reviews

[LetiStoned]

wow i really like this peom very good emotion!!
keep writing:D