Punishment
A Poem by Steven Bilodeau
Sun beats down on my sun burnt skin. Shimmerin' sweat I won't soon forget. Lost inside it's no surprise. Pain in mind for many lies. Now discomfort plagues thy line, total abuse of my life. Now discomfort rules by crime total abuse of these lives. All due to selfish binds, makes me want to just break down and cry.
© 2009 Steven Bilodeau
Author's Note
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Selfish binds?
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Reviews
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This sounds like a very dark and dolorous. It is as if you are opening your soul and showing the reader your pain. I thought, however, it was very well constructed and quite descriptive. Good poem construction!
Posted 15 Years Ago
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Added on September 4, 2009
Author
Steven BilodeauStratford, CT
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My name is Steven Bilodeau, I am 23 years old and I am attending college. I am going for a Bachelors in Science Majoring in Biology and Minoring in Creative Writing. I'm engaged to an amazing girl whi.. more..
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