will's web

will's web

A Poem by William Michael Reeves
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Retaliatory poetry

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This poet weaves his heart's desires in ink;
spins webs of thought to catch the curious.
'Tween lines he hides surprise to make you think
that you've been caught in joy, like all of us.

With silk he pens his verse ... the trap is set;
spun love with hope to bait arachnid's prey.
Casts flights of fancy's fine poetic net ~
unique ideas from a mind at play.

Impaled upon a creeping spider's quill,
we poisoned readers read this writer's write.
There's no escape ~ we're paralyzed by will!
Wrapped up like bugs, we're happy for our plight.

If poetry that makes you smile is sought,
be careful, in will's web you might get caught.

2023

© 2023 William Michael Reeves


Author's Note

William Michael Reeves
willweb wrote a poem for me. Actually talked to me in the poem. The nerve of him! The dishonorable mention caused me to contemplate commiting poeticide. But I decided my only recourse was to write a poem about him. Expose him for the poetic predator he is ... feeding on our smiles like juicy flies.

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I recently read your poem and was struck by the way you use the imagery of a spider spinning its web to describe your craft. The idea of "webs of thought" catching the reader's curiosity and the "surprise" hidden between the lines is really effective, and I found myself drawn in by your words. Your poem is both playful and thought-provoking, and I appreciate the way you celebrate the power of poetry to delight and inspire readers. Thank you for sharing your work with the world!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

Actually, this is about another poet here in the cafe. willweb. If you haven't read his poetry I str.. read more



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Excellent way of expressing poem in creative way. Liked each and every lines. Keep it up

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

Up I'll try to keep it. Do my best to write a hit. I've got a bunch I've recently writ, and hope the.. read more
I love to read a good book William. A book to take us to a better place.
"Impaled upon a creeping spider's quill,
we poisoned readers read this writer's write.
There's no escape ~ we're paralyzed by will!
Wrapped up like bugs, we're happy for our plight"
The above lines. So wonderful. The great writers create a web of words and I am thankful for them. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

I'm a book bug too. willweb's poetry definitely takes us to a happy place. Thanks
Well hello William, it's nice to see you spinning your web again. You always draw this fly in. Both of us have been busy little insects away from the cafe, so happy to read your writing again.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

Thanks Patricia, but this is about and for willweb. But your confusion is understandable considering.. read more
Patricia

1 Year Ago

and there ya go, LOL
Yes feed the handler of the quill with praise and see the development of his silken maze.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

His phrases amazes our minds and hearts in many ways. Poems that are all the craze that create smile.. read more
The nerve of that guy Im sending a letter to the Board of Scriveners this sort of thing must be stopped!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

I know. The Gaul!! If you hear back from the chairman of the board let me know so I can plead my cas.. read more
I recently read your poem and was struck by the way you use the imagery of a spider spinning its web to describe your craft. The idea of "webs of thought" catching the reader's curiosity and the "surprise" hidden between the lines is really effective, and I found myself drawn in by your words. Your poem is both playful and thought-provoking, and I appreciate the way you celebrate the power of poetry to delight and inspire readers. Thank you for sharing your work with the world!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

Actually, this is about another poet here in the cafe. willweb. If you haven't read his poetry I str.. read more
What a clever and enjoyable write we have here! Bravo. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sharon. And with that, I will take a bow! Thanks, read you soon.
Yes I should of read the authors note I understand now !

Posted 1 Year Ago


I’m sure your web has caught many pretty things
I loved this one Will !

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

This one caught one pretty thing ... your pretty purple eye! I wouldn't be the will in question thou.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Year Ago

Oh my mistake !! I’ll re read it. So sorry but I loved it !
This is one interesting Sonnet Bill, I think its a sonnet anyways. Will's web is definitely a web I'd want to get trapped in. A poem that brings me delight, count me in! I do wonder what sparked this retaliatory poem, for that I might have to look through Will's web of poems! A fun, lighthearted piece Bill, thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Year Ago

It was his poem 'Thats it!,.. .Period'. I've been harassing him about using invisible periods. It mi.. read more
Aura

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome. Periods are definitely subjective things, can be a cause for contention ... or.. read more

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Added on May 7, 2023
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William Michael Reeves
William Michael Reeves

Seattle, WA



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I live in Seattle. I have been a nurses aide most of my life and my experiences as a caregiver for people with disabilities has inspired much of my poetry. I love the puzzle of poetry. Expression with.. more..

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