Caste System

A pair of thoughts in Senryu

In lowerarchy
our loins and mechanisms
become intertwined

In hierarchy
media/technology
have now been combined

2022

Author's Note

Or maybe our loins and media have combined?

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Translation
if you go to Walmart after midnight you will see someone in their PJs
and
if you have a smartphone beware big brother
:)very fun combo

[William Michael Reeves]

I do believe Big Brother is busy in Russia and China right now. Writing Newspeak. Oceana and Eurasia. Little creepy robots roam the empty streets of China telling the consumer not to come out and consume as they starve inside. And a police state is almost necessary on streets to keep the masses safe while they consume. Safer to consume inside through the technology serving us media. Fun to think of all the ways they combine. Thanks

[William Michael Reeves]

On our streets we need the state of police that don't exist anymore.

[knighngale]

that's very kool William, I like it,
Yeah, I like it, LOL
It grooves, it moves,
I guess technology is our next passione
Funny, eh, you are remarkable, and air of brush air, ---Maynard

[William Michael Reeves]

Thank you Maynard. I'll take that as a remark I resemble. A brush of fresh air. Or a breath of brushed air. I try to use an airbrush to give my thoughts tight and clear lines so as not to be confused with poetic graffiti painted with a can. Good grooves to be had! Thanks.

[knighngale]

your most welcome dear, yeah, I agree, 😋😎🙄😫

[Chris Shaw]

Interesting thoughts. I'll give the hierarchy a miss. Not fond of the media and technogy doesn't like me :)

Chris

[William Michael Reeves]

Probably doesn't like you because it knows you're not fond of the media. It has tracked you to nowhere and therefore considers you nobody with nothing. You are mutually nullified. Sounds like bliss!

[lightsong]

The hierarchy system was always THERE, someone always want to sit at the top and look down at others. no... excuse me! I would never join such a system. (I am terrible in these subjects but I think I got You here, or not?!)

[William Michael Reeves]

The systems are out of our control. Some of my thoughts on this would be the lowerarchy might be a condition of the poor. Their loins are mechanisms for survival. Or it might be the caste of the depraved. Exploitation as a mechanism. Driving the primal instincts to war and prey. The hierarchy live in a 24 hr global free for all where media exploits and tempers itself. A dog chasing its tail; media exposes us to the evil then cancels the evil doer, right after the commercial that sells evil. Or something like that.

[keith]

no thank you ... i'm am comfortable being a dinosaur!
no cell phone
no cable
no twitter or facebook
no robots here amigo!

[William Michael Reeves]

Your extinction is imminent! Quick, write a poem that you can recite to the robots when they come for you, that short circuits their reason and establishes your humanity.

[keith]

assimilate this
metal mouth
say hello to
my little friend
h2o
RUST ON B*****S!

[lightsong]

Haha! this review is Hilarious! I am also a dinosaur, an innocent lovely one who only eats green, Oh and a poet one too!

[keith]

thank you very much ... we will be here all week!
remember to tip your lovely waitresses!

[lightsong]

Better to be, some handsome waiters for this Female Dinosaur 😂

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I'll take the lowerarchy, thank you very much.
real touch...skin to skin, face to face, ....
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

Careful! What you think is flesh might be a mechanism. Robots everywhere soon. Pretty amazing what they're doing with them. And funny. Did you see those little robots that run around China's sidewalks? They look like bullhorns with dog legs.

[Crowley]

In Holarchy we transcend and include. What an interesting bit of thought process to chew on. It integrates many things that I have been thinking and reading about lately. Thanks for the challenge and excellent writing.

[William Michael Reeves]

Are you the ghost in the machine? We are whole. At least until we get broken up by war. But then that would be the struggle the whole would have...inflamed parts igniting disease that might reduce it to its least common denominator. Happy to stimulate your synapses, thanks.