Naked Poet

Senryu about...us

Naked poet wrote
Hiding and revealing
Meaning in tandem

Author's Note

Got your attention didn't I? We all feel it. We all do it. Get it?

Side note: After I wrote this this morning I thought, that was easy. Too easy. How has this not been written before? 17 syllables. Finite language. ( maybe English can be infinite. I made up a word once. Cheater!) this combination of words must have been written before. It would be interesting if we had a database we could check short work on. I fully expect to get flagged for plagiarism when I hit save. I wonder if the Cafe searches for that. With one of your permission, I wouldn't mind experimenting. I'll post a short work of yours for a minute as if it were mine and see what happens.

Reviews

[K writes]

This is really clever, Love this

[Patricia]

That’s hilarious and clever! Love it!

[shadrach hah]

Like it Bill, hit the funny bone in a most creative way. Have a wonderful Friday....Mike.

[lightsong]

hhahah You are so funny and yet in a clever way and that's the specialty about it :> yes You got my attention by your title... isn't it like hide and seek, or seek and hide?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

fig leaf dropped
exposed
words, shamed into meaning
the garden gate locked

[William Michael Reeves]

I like where you're going with that. Let me keep it going...

Unlocked leaves
Adorned
Thoughts, meant to mortify
A hidden word lost