Synonyms

Playing around with words. This one was for a card I made for someone.

Within our fears
,Hide our hopes
Within our hopes
,Fly our dreams
Without our dreams
,we lose our minds
,our hearts
Without our minds
,we have no fears

Trust and comfort
Trust the comfort

Words of the heart
Heart of our lives
Lives within!

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

Had to ponder this one for a while. --- Thanks! My brain needed the exercise. ;)

[William Michael Reeves]

I'll have to start a verbal gym. Membership fees negotiable. Oh! Maybe that's what poetry is. Exercise for our minds and hearts. There's an idea in there ...

[JE Falcon]

It is one of the paramount reasons that I am still writing, brain exercise. :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

Yes! Light and playful yet packs a punch. Here is evidence of the power of words and the might of the 'pen' in the hand of the author. Thanks for sharing.

[William Michael Reeves]

Glad you brought my attention to this one. I need to fix the punctuation. I can't indent lines. Glad to punch your mind and pen the same that's in your heart.

[Red Brick Keshner]

I thought the punctuation was novel and intriguiging considering what the comma does after a line and now before the next line - like a start stop getting into gear from stationary, up the hill.

[KAREN]

This was a fun play with words! I really enjoyed reading it!

[William Michael Reeves]

Thanks. I think I just saw someone write in a form similar. Oh! The blitz form. Thanks for bringing me back to this. Reminded me. I don't know where the commas came from. I'll have to edit this.

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[mattavelli]

Hello, William! :)
I think this is thoughtful, lovely, and fun. Thanks for sharing.

[William Michael Reeves]

Thanks. Puzzling words is fun. Wrote this for a card I made. Can't be letting Hallmark do it