From me to you;

Click on the little picture to see about you!

He treated you so bad you just wanted to hide.

He took your innocent view of the world away

He belittled you and stole your pride

He blemished your tomorrows and took your day

He made you feel that no one was by your side

He made you feel that you had nothing to say

 

So from me to you;

Author's Note

The original poem for this picture.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Nice and very meaningful poetry and words can be saviors for many: Enjoyed reading

[Sugar Plum ♥]

it sounds so familiar to me, someone, who you let in your inner world, to take advantage of that, to take your "innocent view of the world away". It can`t happen if he is not special already, but he can be a cheater..So your poem is about turning to your inner self, to see the previous girl, who is still there and to feel happiness. I like it as sounds close to me.

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[Dye]

Well, he doesn't sound like a very good man at all. I like your words of encouragement William.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was very sweet. I loved it and it made me smile. Thank you hun.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a big girl with an inner child that needs some hugs and healing....very lovely Bill.

[William J. Marsh]

Exactly, thank you Frieda!

[Eddie Phillips]

Such a sweet poem. Never lose the sense of wonder or the spirit of innocence. I absolutely loved this poem. It is in line with the things I write. Thank you for sharing thus sweet poem.

[William J. Marsh]

Thank you Eddie, you got it.

[Pryde Foltz]

What a wonderful piece of healing. Thank you, William.

[William J. Marsh]

Thank you Pryde, that is what it was mint for.

[Laminators Dubai]

omg
this is actually happening!
kiddin
awesome heart felt rhyme
loved it! ^^

[William J. Marsh]

omg glitch, thank you so much! I love your reviews.

[Laminators Dubai]

come on...you are a good writer after all...

[Lydia Shutter]

What a heartwarming write this is, William. Filled with loving acceptance and support. This must be for your daughter. Lydi**

[William J. Marsh]

Thank you so much Lydia for your kind words.

[OTownPete]

Words and attitudes can be so detrimental to child's view of themselves. Your friend in words, Pete

[William J. Marsh]

Thank you much my friend Pete!