To and fro, to and fro,
around the earth his spirit does flow
searching high, searching low
where did all of his people go
Before daylight ever sees their eye
for a fee his babies die
their mommy's don't cry
and their daddies don't even sigh
To and fro, to and fro
he looks, wanting to know
Selfishness and greed
planted with their every seed
all that matters is what they need
his words they read
yet they do not heed
instead, from the world they choose to feed
Telling others how to live
but of themselves they would never freely give
To and fro, to and fro
where did his people go
Far from home
they did roam
now they face the world all alone
His name
some gladly claim
others speak it to shame
to them it's all a game
very few carry the flame
Daily they cry
me-o-my
always wondering why
Thinking to themselves, the world is so tough
I am not as bad as that one who is so rough
surely I am good enough
To and fro, to and fro
where did all of his people go!
your poem is one big question that contain the answers...
his right here between us....
some papers and word are enough to feel him...
thats a great write...thoughtful...proud...searing for questions...maybe we are the answer...(like me)...
words penned perfect....
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you glitch, I think that you are perfect as well!
11 Years Ago
that a problem...you know why?
whatever i know is just up here...every second...knowledge nev.. read morethat a problem...you know why?
whatever i know is just up here...every second...knowledge never leave my mind..
make me insane...
Although I am more spiritual than religious, I can definitely understand this kind of searching.. I think many have lost the knowledge that God is with us and within us always and as just as we search for that divine spirit, God searches for us. Beautiful poem, lots to ponder here.
"Selfishness and greed
planted with their every seed
all that matters is what they need
his words they read
yet they do not heed
instead, from the world they choose to feed"
A splendid read and write...Thank you for posting...:)
A poem written from G-d's perspective....unique. The words sounded great as I read them aloud...almost like a rap song or lyrics. Very rhythmic and great rhyme. The repetition was effective. I liked this. Lydi**
Wow this is such an interesting perspective...The thoughts and worries of God. It has a wonderful rhythm, although I am not religious, it makes me wonder what a God must feel to know he has lost the faith of his people.
Great write! I really enjoyed reading it
keep writing!
your poem is one big question that contain the answers...
his right here between us....
some papers and word are enough to feel him...
thats a great write...thoughtful...proud...searing for questions...maybe we are the answer...(like me)...
words penned perfect....
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you glitch, I think that you are perfect as well!
11 Years Ago
that a problem...you know why?
whatever i know is just up here...every second...knowledge nev.. read morethat a problem...you know why?
whatever i know is just up here...every second...knowledge never leave my mind..
make me insane...
short stories for your enjoyment. I am always on a quest for adventure. So journey with me now to mysterious islands. Go behind the scenes of my movie years. Read about the ancient ones as we travel.. more..