Love on the web

Falling in love on-line

 

Like a small boy on Christmas eve

For your mail I wait to receive

My eyes on my inbox, I can not leave

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Did you think about me in your dreams

Only a day has passed, though forever it seems

This time apart can separate our hearts, by no means

Your words are like the dancing of tiny moon beams

Dancing on the still water of my dreams.

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Though we have never met eye to eye

nor face to face bye and bye

My thoughts of you are numerous as the stars in the sky

My love for you flies higher than high

Yet higher, higher than angels can fly

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When we meet at last

And all the dreams become the past

In my arms I will hold you fast

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And then forever

We shall be together

Simply in love with each other

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

This is a blissful poem of love. It gives the rapture of loving a person based off what they say and not just by what we see. In this world of visual stimuli you speak of simple communication. Falling for someone and longing to hear from them. To steal a line from Bogart "This is the stuff that dream are made of"

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and your words shine as soft as the stars in the sky, as graceful as an angel can fly...a beautiful song of love. :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Modern day romance, when I read the title my mind went immediately to the intricacies of a spider's web and its power...but I guess this one is no different, it holds that same type of fascination and mystery.

Your words are like the dancing of tiny moon beams
Dancing on the still water of my dreams.

A 'sigh' moment...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I BELIEVE THAT IS THE NORM AS THE WAVE OF TECHNOLOGY GIVES US THAT OPTION...IMAGINE SAYING THIS 20 YEARS AGO...PEOPLE WOULD LOOK AT YOU A BIT STRANGE...NOW ITS JUST A COMMON UNDERSTANDING...

[Laminators Dubai]

titel could be more sassy and artsy like..my on-line heart....love line on-line...etc.

[Laminators Dubai]

omg!
soo sweet...

i read it more than five times and i still wanna read it...
splendid....
...meaning is so awesome but its a bit creepy too...
one another thing...you parted and its needs that too

thanks for sharing this love coated rhyme...