A gift of love

The way a woman should be treated.

 

 

 

Love is something sweet and kind with the deepest of emotions and feelings being compatible in life and with love. To linger knowing your not lost or alone,  for that one person has reached your soul as well as your heart. The thought of love forever not in a dream but in reality. The kind of love that all little girls hope and dream of. That once and final true love…

 

True love is when you find someone that is in love with your mind. Someone who wants to undress your conscience and make love to your deepest thoughts. Someone that patiently waits as you take down all of the walls that neglect has forced you to build up around your heart!

 

So I speak to you my darling;

From deep within, that little girl that you keep hidden away
Bring her out to play
And you shall have a wonderful day! XOXOXO

Author's Note

Just what I feel about women.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

This is a touching write.....one that all women will be nodding their heads at as they read it. "True love is when you find someone that is in love with your mind. Someone who wants to undress your conscience and make love to your deepest thoughts." The most important errogenous zone is the brain....too often people lose sight of that fact. This is so lovely, William. Lydi**

[William J. Marsh]

In America, at least in my generation, xo is a symbol of kisses and hugs given to heal the wounds of someone hurt by a thought to be love and to pass on blessings.

[13]

"Someone that patiently waits as you take down all of the walls" My favorite line. I like that you seem optimistic about love. What may not understand is why the need for "XOXOXO"? I don't know, I just find that term juvenile in general.

[Jennifer Rai]

Nice piece. My Favorite part "True love is when you find someone that is in love with your mind. Someone who wants to undress your conscience and make love to your deepest thoughts."

The type of love which you speak of in this poem, i only see in movies and read stories of. Now a days this doesn't really exist in real life. Its more of a dream which is well impossible to come true.

i love the essence of you writing ...