Blue And Green

Blue And Green

A Poem by Bill MacEachern

Blue And Green

When we learn
To offer hands
We’ll understand
Our same hearts

Then we’ll see
You you & me
Shared earths t*****s
From the start

Earth is our mother
My sister my brother
We’re all children
Of the sea

Let us not wait
Till it’s too late
We’re all the same
Blue and green

Bill MacEachern December 9, 2023

© 2023 Bill MacEachern


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"earth's t*****s" was a bold move, maybe a smart one. I can't seem to find any punctuation and it's a mouthful without them. Maybe a longer version would have been helpful

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bill MacEachern

11 Months Ago

Thank you SecretPoet!

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