Stop Wondering

I wonder if you are waiting for
Me to come walking through a door,
Though we’ll never met before
You’ll look at me and you may not be sure.

You’ll become the loneliest part of me’
Cause with all my  effort you might not see
Just how prefect our two lonelys could be.
If you walk away from me I’ll be in the worst kind of company.

Of course we’ll laugh and become good friends,
But I am looking for something,
Something more than friendship.
I spend the while time wondering if I could kiss your lips.

I’ll be waiting long wondering why you haven’t caught on,
Thinking maybe I’ve been doing it all wrong,
I’ll find a quit place to go’
Cause it makes me nervous to think that you already know.

Winter has never felt so cold,
My rigid bones are staff  I feel so old,
Where  I  stand  all the ice melts
After watching  you with somebody else.

She wondered if I was waiting for
Her to come walking through my door
Though we were friends she felt we could've been more
Now when we look at each other we wonder……..

But now we will never be sure.

Author's Note

To find the perfect person. Someone who's just as lonely as you. A person you know you'll be happy with, and have them be happy with you. But only to lose them, to someone else.

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Been there.. as in this piece.. now I can tell you how wonderful this is or I can tell you that you have an excellent piece here but it could be condensed..
please take my critique in the good faith it is presented. I was here @ the cafe for a year, left to work on my writing and just returned..

You have some amazing lines full of imagry and emotion.
rhyming is very difficult, I myself have never been able to pull it off..

I do like the emotion behind this piece..alot..