Untamed

Crawl as the seconds slip a way                            
run as the minutes passes by
constantly moving with out missing the beat
falling again
So Untamed
113,760 beats a day
So grateful for you
hours and days creep away
with out you i couldn't be
still i wish you would stop doing this to me
so mysterious is you
Untamed

While my body falls asleep
you continue to move involuntarily
holding a steady peace

Wouldn't live with out you so why am i steady giving you away
attached to more then one 
see what i mean by Untamed
why must you continue to freely love
as a mother would to her child
connected to the world with my soul

as a worker bee's story untold
if u keep this up
we wont live for long
UNTAMED

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like it.A real honest straight down the line expression of yourself.Well done.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I Love You, Biggerthanme! Fabulous! Your writing has spelling or grammatical flaws, but I can't remember them in the wake of your emotion.

Untamed, your mind and thoughts are nothing less than "GREAT!!"

[TheArtOfInsanity]

I don't like to use the word beautiful, so I'll use the word intense, and that's what this poem was, intense, you were descriptive enough to paint an image in my mind for each and every stanza. Again you are probably one of my favorite authors on the website

[Groovy]

Highly effective poetry

[VelvetRosetta]

I can hear this being spoken, such power is held here...

Untamed...A wild heart in need of being tamed.

Beautifully done!

[Rene Velez]

Timeless homie....timeless.

[Seshat Nidaba]

Time's lips would be proud to blow you a kiss biggerthenu, this is like spoken word, a variety of which we have FAR to little on this site. Nice job!

[biggerthenu]

Thanks for the kind reviews and I try to bring it to life and lord willing I'll get a deal sooner then later. This is true one does love with your mind but the strongest muscle is your heart cause u cant live with out it and when u choose to give it away oh boy

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love this! the relation of the physical organ and what is represents in conjunction to our spirit..of course we don't actually love with our hearts - your poem is unsightful and clever. nice work

[Coyote Poetry]

"See what i mean by Untamed
why must you continue to freely love
as a mother would to her child
connected to the world with my soul"
No truer words then the one's above. Old heart will be tested. Better to know love then be alone wishing for something out of your reach. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote