WAIST DEEP IN SIN

         waist deep in sin

          how did I get in    

loving the warm you put off

so I pull you near

so good cavemen would have

struck you with a club over the head

then pull you

by your hair to their lair

                 crazy men and women stealing whats

    not even theirs

                                      just for a taste of

Your perfect gift

youngsters shouldn't  but they should be reading this

            most abuse it

      beat it up for a NIGHT

              and never STAND in it again

its call making love

when i get in

guaranteed to leave it pleasured

throbbing yearning more of this

good love

I share because

of love

this is exclusively for you and me

but not

how it was lined up to be

knowing I don't wanna give

you a ring

dirty devilish me

this is the secret i keep

waist deep in sin

how do I live in

this affair

stealing God"s

gift to a matrimonial Godly affair

Reviews

[Umar Hassan]

On the other hand... Most do abuse it at one time or another and from that abuse we hope that they learn what you obviously already know. The connect is so strong you know it can't be wrong!

[Becky C Strukamp]

what an intensely beautifully poem. Nice structure. Loved it.

[MS. BABy]

this is so poignat...sex is abused in the sight of God when improperly used...but the society of today glorifies this type of behavior
thanks for such a good work....and message

[Tasha]

Wow this was intense and definitely a mind opener. I liked the picture. :)
♥ Ta'Shandra

[biggerthenu]

happy you like it this its a mind opener it is cause in this poem analyzes my wrongs and it speaks so loud on how we view things that are wrong as being right lets get lined back up

[Coyote Poetry]

You brought to life a lot of new questions. I have three daughters. I taught them to have common sense. Sex is a great pleasure that can be enjoyed and abused. I was far from being a angel. Some gifts need to be appreciated. I like the photo and the powerful ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote