REALITY

Reality

Recently things haven't been going as well yet in still no

Empathy heartless using back stabbers they                         

Aren't really people corporate America willin 2deal              

Lie steal kill for a funky pieces of paper losin grasp              

Inwardly lost touch on whats really up                                    

Trading everything u was taught as a child completely lost  

     

Yearning greed lust stuck on a buck that's your                   ^
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^REALITY!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                    

                                     

Reviews

[biggerthenu]

WOW MS CHRISTIANA THIS WAS REALLY HEART FELT AND REAL TRULY A EYE OPENER NO POEM CAN SUCK IF ITS SPEAKING TRUTH THERE ARE SO MANY DIFFERENT PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD THEY MAY NOT BE ABLE TO RELATE IT BUT YOU REALLY TOUCHED ME WITH UR KIND WORDS AND YOUR IMAGE OF REALITY PLEASE EVERYONE LETS CALL OUR PARENTS AND THANKS THEM FOR PLACING THERE BEAUTIFUL HANDS IN OUR LIFES AND IF THERE NEAR YOU PLACE UR ARMS AROUND THEM YOU WONT HAVE THEM FOR EVER!!! AND IF THERE GONE PLACE A PRAY FOR THEM THOUGHT OUR FATHER IM SURE THERE RECEIVE IT SOME HOW

[Christina May Shanaberg]

First off, no poetry sucks; especially, when it is as true as this piece. You expressed your point well. Were some people bred by two banks mating? You'd think so, the way that they worship money and forget there are other people in this world. I know elderly people who rarely hear from their ungrateful, grown children, after raising them up and putting them through college. That's all that these people know; stacks of paper, especially, the green ones with presidents on them. I liked your poem!

[biggerthenu]

wow a review yay me thanks so much i started believed it sucked thanks special agent you saved my confidence

[compositionc]

That was gnarly. Very cool. And inspiring. In a messed up way.

[biggerthenu]

let me know what u think!!!