Choices

Choices

A Poem by biggerthenu
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Life’s journey is full of choices. A “QUOTE from my friend L. Bank III Choices reflect discipline. Yet disciplined choices, produces growth. ~Moxie Solo © 2017 Lenard L. Banks Ill

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Being fateful with you, leaves us soulmate less.
Please let me speak.
Alternatively chasing a thought of being one, Appeared only as a mirage in this desolate conundrum of connected blind love we played.
Still longing to touch, your inner soul.
Praying one day to ride the clouds of favor.
But our choices are wrong.
Miscommunication, lacking verbal stimulation.
Seems hope for us is running at a all time low.
Depleting daily not fully functional, misfiring, lacking the most important chromosomes to function.
We chose this so-called love to love.
Stranded on this road to holy matrimony.
Nurtured and protected the lost A-bandit ones.
Grabbing that dim lite metal torch lying on the ground, I made a choice.
Stoking it’s fire till it was at a rolling blaze, burning my hands unable to pass it no ones willing to endure this pain.
Loving them through their Haze my heart is unchanged standing strong steadfastly waiting in a well lite circle for a better Choice to be made.

© 2019 biggerthenu


Author's Note

biggerthenu
What do you think i tried on the grammar lol and the ending let me know what you think about this one

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I love the vulnerability in this writing but honestly love can't exist without displaying vulnerability. This was my favorite line "Stoking it’s fire till it was at a rolling blaze, burning my hands unable to pass it no ones willing to endure this pain." Love is a choice keep choosen it. Sometimes love is not always perfect and can be a hard line to walk as long as your heart is willing to love. give it the grace to do so. We the heart is done so shall the body follow. Thanks for sharing hometeam!

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Added on November 30, 2019
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biggerthenu

UMM, KY



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