The price

Laugher echoes over the rolling hills
Passionate love on a bed of flowers
Lacking luster sounding more creepy the more I remember
Eighty days late and a day short is what she said
The price has been paid the deeds done
Paralyzed by words cutting like knives
Through my ears straight to my heart

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[Rene Velez]

We all pay a price. In love, it can cost a lot. Well done.

[Taino]

The imagery is vivid. You can feel a sense of hopelessness and fear near the end of the poem. Very well written. Please keep writing and creating.

[biggerthenu]

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Taino. I will add
on. Thanks

[biggerthenu]

Thanks
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It's very
Short but
It very loud
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Is it to short?