On the road

On the road

A Poem by biggerthenu
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A Family's walk through life

"
Hast is not
Patiently treading life's changing road
Ambitiously seeing where we need to be so
We travel on
Forth going through it all
Over coming those hidden thorns we've stepped on
Left foot right
Through many rain storms yes there was mud
We used it as life's war paint
travel on
Tis isn't a flight to board on
Left foot right
Carefully navigating this rugged terrain
Digging trenches for the fights that we face
Lite a fire for the lurking eyes
Now we see their glares dangers near
Grab a spear
Oh no we mustn't stop there
fierce and love
Must fuel us
Over coming the nay sayers
Oh yes we must
And the cabin fever minus the shelter
Plenty of rough weather
Yet we face it together
As One able body
Growing bigger and better

© 2019 biggerthenu


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I found this an accurate description of the realities of life; the obstacles, the good times and the bad but through it all we bond together to succeed. Our weaknesses become our strengths, our flaws become what others love and cherish but in the end our family accepts us and includes us in this journey.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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biggerthenu

6 Years Ago

Thanks for
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Sharing your
Thoughts
Building Of
One self.. read more



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So... mind touching!
Rhythmic in a way..
What do you mean by "Grab a spare" ?
If you mean the long fighting or hunting staff, then it should be written like this: "spear."


Posted 6 Years Ago


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biggerthenu

6 Years Ago

Thanks
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Correction
I missed
that but
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I found this an accurate description of the realities of life; the obstacles, the good times and the bad but through it all we bond together to succeed. Our weaknesses become our strengths, our flaws become what others love and cherish but in the end our family accepts us and includes us in this journey.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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biggerthenu

6 Years Ago

Thanks for
Reading and
Sharing your
Thoughts
Building Of
One self.. read more
Everything worth having must be fought for even happiness. I know all so well these battles we face with trampled mud used as war paint. Love this work warrior. Dope

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

biggerthenu

6 Years Ago

Thanks bro
I have grown
To understanding
This journey
Isn't easy but not.. read more

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Added on April 15, 2017
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HELLO I'M ONLY HERE BECAUSE I EXIST AND POETRY HELPS ME ANALYZE EVERYTHING AROUND ME ITS MY THERAPY AND I'M HAPPY TO HAVE BEEN INVITED TO WC I'M NOT BIG ON GRAMMAR BUT I ENJOY WRITING IF THAT MAKES AN.. more..

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