You Haunt Me

I'm haunted by the thought of you
I hear the voice of you
It's like a ghost from my past that won't let me rest
What's happen still haunts my heart 
Even when I die it will still haunt me too
At night I can't hide because your thought will always haunt me
I can't escape what has happen even if I want to
I will never be able to get through
Your screams will always haunt me
I can't get out of my own mind
I will never break through
When I heard you died 
I knee from now on 
You'll always haunt me!

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Very nice poem.
I adore this line in particularly.("At night I can't hide because your thought will always haunt me
I can't escape what has happen even if I want to")It's a very powerful poem
and I enjoyed every line of it.
Flawless Job!

[Brittni]

It speaks to me in ways that only your writing can do for me. I wonder what your inspiration was for it. Haunting and perfect.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice job(:

[billie peach]

Interesting poem. It's dark, but intriguing. Good job!

[Jazique]

Work on a few spelling and present and past tense us and puncations(own spelling bad) Other than that, it was a wonderful poem and somewhat in the spirit of the season. Bravo!