Story telling

Your such a story tella and you can't help but lie 
I can't even trust the foolish words that come from you
I believe in everything you've told me you'd do
I can't even tell what is really the truth
Your stories are wrapping around my mind 
And they gave gotten me so blind
As I hear the words fall from your mouth
I can't trust them because I don't know how
You have lied to me over and over again
Why do I try to pretend
that I can ever trust you again
Your lies have got me so blind
I have finally lost my mind
I can't go on listening to your stories again
I am telling you it's the end
Your story tellen days have come to an end. 

Reviews

[light and ashes]

very nice I enjoyed reading this.

[Fabric Pulse]

Weird..I have a poem called "Story Teller." Two minds alike! Lol. Anyway, this was good, especially the lines, [Your stories are wrapping around my mind and what they gave has gotten me so blind.] It makes the situation itself in the poem mean more, be more. The emotion you felt as writing goes right to your reader.

[Jazique]

Very good. Theres a story within every conversation true or NOT.

[Dante Balsote]

there are lots of lies to open eyes.

[Brittni]

Sounds like a rocky relationship finally coming to an end by the person who has had enough and knew that he/she could do so much better.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice job(:

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

this is one great poem for its big impact to the readers, the way people can easily related to it:)