The monster in me

The monster in me

A Poem by Big_Mac

I can feel him tearing at my core

The monster in me will no longer stands to be ignored 

I feel him ripping and fighting to be free 

I can no longer keep him caged when I feel his rage

I want to let him free but then I'll no longer be

I feel his darkness starting to take over and I refuse to believe. 

I can't control his rage and his darkness now that it's free

I am no longer me now that my monster is free

The beast that was inside of me will no longer let me be

© 2010 Big_Mac


Author's Note

Big_Mac
The song animal I become made me write this.

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very dark and foreboding. someone i would not want to mess with. it's good to be aware when the monster is taking over but you have to be stronger and fight it to remain you. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Reminds me of someone with extreme rage issues.
Really great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


i liked this one, its like the monster inside of you is the anger inside of you.
good poem! enjoyed it. eager to see more

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can see how you were inspired by that song. This reminds me alot of your personality too sweetie. You bottle things up for too long and when it finally comes to a head and boil over, you behave like an animal who has escaped from his cage.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Monsters sing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great Job!(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow nice job must be one beastly song.

Posted 14 Years Ago


inner turmoil..and yeah, three days grace rocks..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nicely written

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Big_Mac
Big_Mac

St. Amant, LA



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