Love Stains

Love Stains

A Poem by BigDaddySiddle
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Staining like a good'n (Y)

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Who thought that 'designer gear'

Could have made me write on here?

Well, it's time to step inside the Siddle Hut...

 

My top-of-the-range, non-Primark jumper,

Still has a certain scent from my dumper.

After several washes, it still lingers,

So I try to smudge it with my fingers...

 

Like a stain.

 

Nothing can make me forget this stain, 

Pink won't remove it, even after I've washed it again.

I've tried many different bleaches to tackle it,

Not the cartoon Simon, coz I'd look like a right tit.

 

The make of the hoody was supposed to be Henley's

Now I think it's faithfully Jenny's.

© 2011 BigDaddySiddle


Author's Note

BigDaddySiddle
Note the technique, you don't need to ask me about Simon... You'd never look at my shit again :P fudge fudge

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LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:P i never sprayed any perfume on it to give him it back.. it just smells like me :') Rather awesome poem if I do say so myself :P x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Top of the morning to ya ;P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautiful jacob, i f*****g hate it when your ex gives back your hoody and it's obvious they've sprayed it with their perfume :S it's a sign of insecurity as far as i can see it, damn hoes :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 29, 2011
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BigDaddySiddle
BigDaddySiddle

Darlington, and proud, United Kingdom



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They call me Jacob because my mother and father gave me that name when I was born :) I'm a male, ladies ;) A few things I rather enjoy doing in order: 1. Exploring various D.I.Y. stores and comparin.. more..

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