Ending the cycle.

You stole.

You lied.

You killed.

You Hurt.

You Destroyed.

No more.

I raise my hand. 

I grip the handle.

I squeeze the trigger.

I break the cycle. 

Reviews

[Huw]

This can also be seen as the last words of someone putting a gun to their own head. We steal our own peace, we lie to ourselves, we murder people in our minds, we hurt ourselves and others, enough guilt will drive a person to the edge.

Breaking the cycle of life...

[Haim Kadman]

You taught him the right lesson... I
liked it.

[Neville]

well there ya go
there's no surprise
can't argue
with a Colt 45
tween the eyes

I enjoyed this little read and thank you for it..... Neville

[Samiat]

Lovely and really heart breaking
It's a very short and understanding poem

[andrew mitchell]

Concise work, great ending.