Workshop

by Shin & Bidayah

 

 

 

 

The world is a workshop,

For the development of mankind,

To realize the power of mind,

To rise to future horizons,

To be master of the universe,

It starts here today, a little man,

Pondering how? Looks for clues,

Omens, signs and the intimation of love,

The rediscovery of innocence.

Reviews

[Marie]

The world is a workshop, always being worked upon.

[Heather Clayton]

yes, indeed, "the world is a workshop"- I like that, very touching piece.

[Archia]

It's something quite thoughtful, something to consider. The world is truly something that can be twisted and turned through mankind's hands. But in every workshop there is always accidents. I like what you were saying in this poem, and how you expressed it simply but still it had that flowery rhythm that comes across not in words but through ideas.