When You Have Everything

When You Have Everything

A Poem by Shin ( formerly known as ) Bidayah

 

 

 

When a person has everything they want,

They need a friend who, also is such,

So that they can respect each other,

And enjoy the gift of equality together,

Its important to know this when making friends,

Your friends will appreciate you for it.

© 2012 Shin ( formerly known as ) Bidayah


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Hmm, quite thoughtful. I agree and disagree with that. With friends that are equal, it takes away jealousy. Though with true friends shouldn't care about what one has that they don't. And, a person who has a friend that has less than them, may come to realise that material items aren't everything. It really is something to think about. I do like, how you expressed this in a short poem, it says what it needs to say and doesn't ramble on. A nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree with you. People who are not equals have much to overcome.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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