The Bakery Shop

 

 

 

 

There's a Chinese bakery shop in Rome,

I went there when my father was alive,

The owner has a pretty daughter,

She looks very pure and virtous,

That makes the bread taste even better,

I think that's why he said that bread

Is the stuff of life. He made miracles with it.

Reviews

[Marie]

Very nice poem, pointed and meaningful.

[MOON]

You are so very funny and smart. Great write.

[emmajoy]

Such a clever, clever train of thought here.. especially for a twelve year old boy. The imagination's sharp, the vocabulary quite startling (tho a typo, line 4) and you've presented a very good and possible denouement!