The Infidel became God

The Infidel became God

A Poem by Shin ( formerly known as ) Bidayah

 

 

 

 

Confusion reigns the lives of men these days,

So powerful it is, we make the simplest mistakes,

That's how the infidel became god, was unintentional.

Where there is common sense, there's no fixed virtue,

Its all a matter of choices and the decisions made,

I think God went to Acapulco, he needed the break.

I wonder if that's the new city mother's in.

© 2012 Shin ( formerly known as ) Bidayah


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Good. Cleverly twisted. Last line should read: "I wonder if that's the new city Mother's in?"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmm, you really like to set riddles in place of questions, don't you! Fine flow in this poem though metre's a little erratic, however the thought process is clear, more or less, depends on the choices and decisions one makes when one re-reads and sits back. Hope you find your mother. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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