Never again Nevermore

I would just like to thank Riley for giving me the name to this poem. I just wanted someone to name this one for some reason. Just all in good fun. Hope you enjoy.

sleepless nights

pointless dreams

there never was an inbetween

left so quick

like a pray

what we had I thought was rare

there's a point

there has to be

for me feeling so much misery

I'm ok

I'm alright

there are many more stars at night

so they say

so I'm told

why am I the only one not in control

need to think

got a plan

though there is much I do not understand

find myself

find one more

so my heart will ache no more

 

By: Adam Ridge

 

Reviews

[You Don't Know Me]

I really liked this, especially the way it flowed. You said so much in such a short piece, which is something I'd love to be able to do.

this is really really good! love the mix of long and short lines. gives it a great rhythm

[Riley]

Good write. =] Its amazing how much emotion is comming from your words.
As for a title... The first thing that came to my head was "Never again Nevermore"
I dunno if you will like it or not but i figured it was worth writing down.

-Patches