I Surrender

 

Brightening flash in the blink of an eye
Blinds my sight for a second's worth
Cold metal sharpened
Strokes through the flesh
Cuts deeper than the sight of an eagles eyes
The taste of iron
The smell of fresh blood dripping
Each droplet forming its own unique sound
Echoing the song of failure
Skies turns to gray, then fade to black
The rainstorms unending
Mixing blood with water
Thunder and lightning;
Wrath of the Gods
I shall suffer a slow,painfull death
For I cause nothing but pain
And even though there's nothing to fear
But fear itself
I fear the living dead
And give my life to thee

 

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

A wonderful dark poem, might i just sugguest you make the font a bit smaller. It would help with the look of the poem.

Leran Vakem

[Raven Malak]

Feeling like no matter what you do, you always hurt the ones you love. Seeing the look in thier eyes is enough to kill you. Your heart Breaking into a million Fragments

Good work Keep them Coming.

Raven Malak