LIFE IS SHORT MAKE IT SWEET

Simple Solutions to Overcome Depressions.

                   LIFE IS SHORT MAKE IT SWEET                           

A girl always gets depressed when everyone comes to her parents and complaints about her behaviors like she is very sensitive, she talks against elders, she doesn’t help her mother on household works and so on. At first she gets depressed and cries. The girl’s mother used to advices her to be “Calm” and her father always says only one word “Ignore”. But as time passed on the girl realized some simple solutions

1. Whatever the problems are face it by yourself.

2. Respect one’s point of view.

3. Forget and forgive others.

4. Of course the others doesn’t know your side of life.

5. So finally, “Life Is Short” it’s in our own hands to “Make It Sweet”. 

Author's Note

What do you think of my essay,suggestions,grammar etc

Reviews

[Lorry]

Facing problems by yourself can be difficult, but if you learn by your own mistakes, you find out little by little who you truly are.
That's not to say all advice is bad advice, but you have to also learn that too and it is usually learned the hard way.
Trust yourself and try to trust others, until they prove themselves to be untrustworthy.
Sometimes trust us years in the making, but sometimes, you will find it is worth it.
On spelling, complaints should be complains, behaviours should be behavior and advices should be advise. All simple enough mistakes bur easily remedied and even spellchecker makes them too!
And yes, life is short. Much shorter than we sometimes think, so my advice to you would be, doit while you still can, otherwise one day you will be too old to and regret not doing it while you still could. 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poet… many young Girls want to enjoy the outdoors where Sunshine is warm and Nature is a Haven.. especially if you have a Horse that is Gentle and knows the way Home. There will be plenty of time for Chores in the years ahead. Gently, Pat

[Ken Simm.]

Subject, 1 yep. 2 Yep, three, yep, four yep , five yep.
The structure. Oh yes.
The sweetness. I love its whimsicality, its humour and its sense in more ways than one.

[Betty Hermelee]

We all make mistakes in life but we learn from those mistakes…. And it’s better to be kind to others, not criticize, and then you will enjoy life to the fullest….forgive and forget and respect others…..a must!
Well don, you deliver some good ideas…..
Warmly, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom shared. Better to listen and learn. Easy to fall to the naysayers. Thank you Bargavi for sharing your amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[emmajoygreen]

I think your essay is finely phrased, fine language.. and giving such wise advice. There must be many of us who need to follow your example; thank you so much for sharing.

' So finally, “Life Is Short” it’s in our own hands to “Make It Sweet”.

[Bargavi]

Thank you for your review and support

[emmajoygreen]

I'm hoping some friends will visit your offering, it is so worthy of attention, Bargavi :)