Midnight

I was struggling hard to get you back but at the end of day you left me alone in this midnight...

Today I tried once again
But you were too busy to feel me
Too busy to see my presence...
Maybe because you had your girl
Your girl in your arms....

Today, I tried once again
But you are too busy to see
To see how hard I was trying
Not to cry once again, not to be broken once again...
You broke your promise to wipe those cries...

Today, I tried once again
But you were too busy to catch
To catch the hurt you promised to keep
To keep forever and ever...
You broke not just your promise but me...

Today, I tried once again
But you were too busy to feel me...
To feel that darkness around me
To feel my crave for light...
And you left me in this midnight...

Author's Note

Please let me know how it is?
Feel free to criticize...

Reviews

[Jade]

this is a really beautiful write, i enjoyed this

[Astine]

Thanks for appreciating it

[brokenwriter]

F**k, this is beautiful...

[Onlyme]

Sad, emotional and heartbreaking, to love someone. Who suddenly leaves you for someone else. And you just can't deal with the quick break up and their new relationship. It makes you miss them even more. Good read.

[m3lody mae]

I really like this, it is very emotional and heart tugging really. nice job