Untitled - My first romance novel.
A Book by MrsHardin12
© 2012 MrsHardin12
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Please feel free to help me. Is my point of view and tense consistent? I feel like I can only re-read my work so many times in one sitting, I'm inevitably going to miss some things. Does it feel personal? How does my protagonist come off (what's your impression of her?) Do you feel attached or attracted to John yet?
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Point of view is spot on, I'm connecting with Faye, because I definitely would not know how to change my tire either. She seems very realistic, character-wise. She's believable.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on July 20, 2012
Last Updated on July 20, 2012
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I am a young mother and wife who has always loved reading. I have always wanted to write but I never get farther than a week into a project. I am hopeful that I can get some encouragement and helpful .. more..
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