Worth

Missing you

Not so exciting
but everything was
sort of normal..
like life usually is..

Then you came crashing in
out of nowhere..
Brought in unlimited joys,
smiles and laughters

We have a weird connection
relieving another's stress..
Being one of the reasons
to smile for each other..

The intimacy seemed to
reach the peak..
and then dropping gradually
our talks..meetings..interactions

We sure have a lot of memories
sweet..cute..funny..
and now it hurts so much
for nothing seems to be the same

Everything is fading away
my tears just don't stop at night
Keeps me wondering
Were those memories worth
this pain?

Reviews

[¿]

As per my observation in several atmospheres I guess these pains of memories are kind of lessons of our life....the stain of pain stays much more vibrant than happiness maybe that's why it's called lesson so that it stays in our mind for long...and may it continue!
Well expressed dear😊

[Lavi]

Very true work of writing. I love the build-up of this and then the final line pretty much connects to all the readers who have been through this similarly and then some. Awesome job! :)

[Beyond_me]

Thanks for the feedback.. 😀

[Donna]

I know how much it hurts, but if you didn't have the pain, you would not have the wonderful memories. Try to be thankful for the time you did have with that person. Nicely written.