Awakening

In her deepest corners of the "I"
She's hiding Self...

She is guarding Self from outside world
That is too great for her...

She is frightened to get lost outside
Yet it's too late,
She is already lost inside..

Lost in the heavy winds,
Lost in the darks,
Lost in the swirl of thoughts
Inside the mystery of worlds...

She seeks for peace and beaty there
But her Self drowns
In depths of tears...
In pools of sadness...

It takes her Self to depths
where human cannot reach

    and then ...

He comes and shines...

His gentle loving eyes touch hers,
His glowing lips embrace her
He brings her back to world.


He takes her hand and lightens path
by light of angels...


She starts to glow and feel...
        feel grateful
for the Light He shares with her...

Reviews

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Gah! that lit my day. aww poor girl that must really suck to live in such a world then again we live in the same world, yeah our loves are the sun of our day *sighs* great job!

[Jessi Leigh]

Heart warming :) I found a saying - Alone we wander, together we find our way...
Looking forward to reading more from you

[Kat]

Very beautiful. It speaks to the lonely mind and to the welcoming heart.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

This was very interesting, and holding a lot of meaning!! Great job :)

[Dove]

This is a nice poem :) keep up the great work. You definantly have potential!