A lost lonely teardrop

A lost lonely teardrop

Cried in secret

Shed in the moonlight

A lost loney teardrop

Meant for you

Stolen by the night

I hope it finds its way to you

I hope you know it was shed in truth

Lost in the stars

Translated by the moon

If I can't see your face again

I hope the teardop finds you soon

Reviews

[Jennesis]

'Hope the teardrop finds you soon'. So many times we shed those tears and the ones who we are crying for never know. :(

[BBP]

We hope they do!

[Omikron]

"Meant for you, stolen by the night"

I love this text in particular. Makes me remember all the sleepless crynights I've had, and others also.

I like this poem, it's simple but emotional. Good job!

// O

[BBP]

Thank you! It's almost a literal translation of my sleepless nights as well!

[MOON]

Poignant lovely write expressive.

[BBP]

Thank you Moon!

[Valentine]

Sad write from the lonely hearted. Valentine

[BBP]

Missing someone inspires so much...

[Ted Kniffen]

As Jackie Wilson sang 'lonely teardrops, my pillow never dries' Good write, Bev

[BBP]

Lol it was playing in my head when I wrote the first line! Love that song!

[Gee]

No good telling a casket, headstone what should have been said in their living years. Far to late then.

[BBP]

Always a hindsight regret

[Paul Bell]

If only we said the words before we cried the tears.
But i suppose it's always been that way.

[BBP]

Always .... There's never a regret left unfelt when they're gone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of loss of friends...and those tears we hope they know were shed for them...because of the sorrow but also the proof of how much those friends meant to us...

we often don't let people know enough while they are with us just how special they are.

j.

[BBP]

So true and it's always realized too late.

Thank you for the kind words and review

[Lorry]

Beautifully capturing the essence of loss and acceptance that we must face sometimes, that words once said, can only now be thought.

[BBP]

Very elegantly put. Thank you!

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A beautiful gentle longing feeling for someone who I'm sure is up in the stars. There's a vulnerability here not overly heavy just kinda letting us see a bit of heart.
'I hope you know it was shed in truth' I like that line very much. Great piece. Starz

[BBP]

Thanks stars! I knew you would appreciate this one :)