A lost lonely teardrop

A lost lonely teardrop

Cried in secret

Shed in the moonlight

A lost loney teardrop

Meant for you

Stolen by the night

I hope it finds its way to you

I hope you know it was shed in truth

Lost in the stars

Translated by the moon

If I can't see your face again

I hope the teardop finds you soon

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

This is an amazing poem!! Youve added so much detail to make us visualize it!
A short, delicate poem breaks the readers into so much thoughts! It could mean so much... Thats what your poem did... took the readers into a short and sweet journey as poem and it ended so suddenly... but the flow made it better...

[BBP]

Thank you very much.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)
You deserve the best

[Ardra]

If I can't see your face again
I hope the teardop finds you soon

mmmm so many tear drops are shed in loneliness for the one we love.. if only they could understand the truth of it....

the poem is very sadly beautiful

[BBP]

Thank you Ria. It holds alot of truth for me. :)

[richieb]

I like this poem and the way it was written. Your words are moving, nice imagery using the tear drop as the main focus of your poem.
Richie b.

[BBP]

Thanks Richie. 😊

[Joey Nizz]

well wrote, makes the reader get in touch with the words by heart. thanks for a wonderful poem.

[BBP]

Thank you for checking it out

[Joey Nizz]

You're welcome, and thanks for sharing.

[Andy L]

Heartfelt and beautifully written. Nice work.

[BBP]

Thank you. It was a personal write so very heartfelt. Thank you for noticing

[Andy L]

Heartfelt and beautifully written. Nice work.

[BBP]

Sorry I missed this Andy! Thank you for the kind words. 👊🏼

[matrixmark]

This is beautifully written. The last line was really touching.

Mark.

[BBP]

Thank you Mark. You are so kind, I am so glad my poem could move you so deeply.

[matrixmark]

You are more than welcome. Always pleasure.

Mark.

[aLittlePain]

The second stanza is profound Bev! I can certainly relate to it. While we resist feeling and pain I think it's important to feel. It's almost like a gift, of ownership/acceptance/knowing. I'm sorry I drabble sometimes. Powerful poetry. R x

[BBP]

So true... Feelings are really a luxury we don't always get. Hence sunnys state of mind... It's not far fetched from real life

[cs richardson]

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

[BBP]

Thanks for stopping by CS

[Chris]

Thoughts of the dark and silence as if re-sitting the sea walls along the "way"...

[BBP]

Thanks for stopping by