Let him be

Let him be

A Poem by BBP

All fucked up with a gun in his hand
Talking 'bout some s**t that no one understands
Just leave him alone and he'll be better tomorrow
Just let him get drunk and wallow in his sorrow

© 2016 BBP


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Gee
Sometimes your damned if you do and damned if you dont. We all deal with life's trials differently, some need an arm round their shoulders others left to stew. Straight talking, like this Bev

Posted 8 Years Ago


BBP

8 Years Ago

glad you understand the flip side of it! Thank you so much for checking it out !
Gee

8 Years Ago

My pleasure
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Sometimes the gun looks like something else all together, but the pain is always the same. What a vivid even graphic write that I can relate to. I dig the voice sometimes you just have to let the s**t play out. Powerful in so few lines. Cheers Starz

Posted 8 Years Ago


BBP

8 Years Ago

Thank you .... I try to to keep it short but glad the message came through!
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8 Years Ago

For sure that's some talent to convey so much in so few words. I admire that.
BBP

8 Years Ago

Wow! I honestly appreciate that! Thank you Starzy!
This sounds really and kinda the wrong and right thing to do. If you know what I mean. He in question my do what no one understands or end his sorrow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BBP

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes it's right and wrong all twisted up. Thanks again for reading and commenting. Much ap.. read more
Lord of mad men

8 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.
Short but engaging and real, I've been in that situation with a friend. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BBP

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you understood and appreciated the simplicity of it.

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Added on September 2, 2016
Last Updated on September 2, 2016
Tags: whiskey, gun, drunk, sorrow, pain, regrets

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