STILL

STILL

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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Mother Nature's Ravages...remnants

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The sky is clear today

yet the landscape transforms day to day

my heart pains to see colorless matter

still, as it was before

 

Houses sweep over giant boulders to river’s end

today, crumbled pieces of……

one man and his dog wait too long on his roof

and he tumbles with his house onto piles of wet earth

of what once was a crystal-clear lake

now a mud pond

he dies

sticks and stones surround

piles of them, once many homes

 

Bridges collapse under force of murky water

flows at immense speed from mountaintops to destroy

deep crevices, still

personal remnants along the roadside, still

food and water needs, still

the morgue, silent with unidentified bodies, still

 

I cannot foresee the future of this corner of the world

and how mother nature devastates

It is an unending battle to recover, still

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2025 Betty Hermelee


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Betty Hermelee
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Such an emotional piece here, This made me ponder a bit about life.
Very nicely written and expressed.

Posted 7 Hours Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Hours Ago

Thank you for your fine review!
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷
poetgurl

3 Hours Ago

not a problem, happy to do so...
That is the truth and nothing but... superbly, tragically told.

You have the ability, focus and heart to take away the outer skin of a truth then - expose it for near everthing it is, Betty.

Posted 1 Day Ago


emmajoygreen

9 Hours Ago

I can only try!!! Hug.
Betty Hermelee

3 Hours Ago

Okay I’ll accept one❣️❣️
emmajoygreen

3 Hours Ago

Smile breaks into a laugh- thank you..

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Added on January 5, 2025
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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