SILVER HAIR

SILVER HAIR

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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pre-mature

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my best friend in middle school had silver hair
the only one in the class
sometimes classmates referred to her as an old lady
down to her bottom she flipped it around to show the length
she certainly stood out in the whole school
though she flaunted it and and ignored the negative remarks
the bottom line: her mom was also had silver hair in middle school
what can you do if it’s hereditary? be proud that you are so unique! 

© 2024 Betty Hermelee


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I empathise with your friend Betty. Ever since my late thirties I had been hoping to go grey in a kinda George Clooney way, but only the sides went grey and even now at 56, I am left wondering why the top of my head is relatively stress free and continues in its weirdly too dark darkness. It leaves my head looking like I sellotaped a bad wig on and although it is getting less dark with only a hint of pepper, it means I am only comfortable if I cover it with my beanie hat, which is super fun in summer.
It got so bad I started wishing I was bald, but then my hair started to thin and I wished I'd shut my trap.
I'm sure there's a lesson in there somewhere, but all I can think of is always carry a spare beanie and don't get bored during lockdown and shave your head, because wearing a beanie on a shaved head is torture and acts like velcro!
Remember, no shaving it off, even if you are bored!
😃

Posted 3 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Thank you Lorry...I'm sure you look just gorgeous!!!
Beanie cap or not!
Warmly, B
I love how you celebrate self love in your poem, your poem also brought me back dear memories of a childhood friend with a shock of silver in his hair- thank you!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Thank you Amanda, I appreciate your review!
Warmly, B
Aw, Betty!
The ravages of youth! I hope she's kept it over the years! And what a special trademark to own! I'm tinkinf if I were to write a prose short story or novel, I'd want that to be a cool trait for a female lead.
I'm closing my eyes to see a 12-year-old with butt-length silver hair.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Dear Vol...she has kept it, but now it's much shorter!
Thank you for your review!
Warm.. read more
Being Hungarian... it was remarkable that I spent my grade school years and high school years in Maryland with Nancy Medvee who also had Parents from Hungary. It was a Bond never broken. Remarkable coincidence. I was born in West Virginia because the Statue of Liberty brought my family Via the Statue of Liberty and sent them to West Virginia. It was lovely to have an Accounting of all the Immigrants... as early or earlier as 1940. Amen... hugs, Pat

Posted 3 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Thank you dear Pat
Warmly, B
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Betty... whether it is Silver Hair or Nationality... the ethinticity brings forth a unique beau.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Amen!!!! xoxo
Yeah... lovely remainder...
If others can't be proud of us, certainly we can do ourselves instead 😅
I remember hp -silver trio... Luna...
In my class also there was a boy with full white hair, but he did colouring his hair black....
Acceptance of appearance (self and others) is important...


Posted 3 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Indeed it is...Thank you for your kind review!
Warmly, B

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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