SILVER HAIR

pre-mature

my best friend in middle school had silver hair

the only one in the class

sometimes classmates referred to her as an old lady

down to her bottom she flipped it around to show the length

she certainly stood out in the whole school

though she flaunted it and and ignored the negative remarks

the bottom line: her mom was also had silver hair in middle school

what can you do if it’s hereditary? be proud that you are so unique! 

Reviews

[peter Charlesworth]

Aye there's nowt to do wi what hair your given
Mine was golden then turned dark some call it mousy

About thirty it came back lighter
Now it is white as wind blow snow
And just as unruly

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your very relatable review
Warmly B🌷🌷🌷

[Aarti Sriram]

Enjoyed your writing dear Betty! I had a school friend who had hints of peppery hair from school day itself and very early on all it became a very salty look. His mom too had dense all grey hair. But to this day they have such a youthful face and the grey cover looks handsome on them giving an intellectual appeal. Some people are poised and know to carry themselves well. Very graceful poem , It also makes us think how to take things positively no matter how much negativity is around.. Thankyou dear for a lovely poetry.

[Betty Hermelee]

thank you for an understanding and lovely review, much appreciated🌷
Warmly, B

[Snow_]

Amazing story. Amazing lesson,

But i think it was too much telling just my opinion.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for visiting and writing a lovely review!
Warmly, B

[Yana Larson]

This poem is a touching tribute to individuality, resilience, and friendship. The speaker’s admiration for their friend’s silver hair, a rare and beautiful trait that drew attention, resonates throughout. Lines like *“down to her bottom she flipped it around to show the length”* capture a sense of confidence and pride, while *“she flaunted it and ignored the negative remarks”* speaks to her strength in the face of teasing. The conversational tone gives it an honesty and simplicity that makes it feel relatable and heartfelt.

The theme of embracing what makes us unique recalls the work of poets like Naomi Shihab Nye and Jacqueline Woodson, who often celebrate individuality and identity with warmth and acceptance. The closing line, *“be proud that you are so unique!”* leaves readers with a sense of empowerment and positivity. Overall, this is a charming, affirming piece that reminds us of the beauty in our differences and the strength in owning them.

[Betty Hermelee]

thank you Yana, once again for an amazing, poignant review… you seem to have a good understanding of human emotions….Warmly, B🌷

[Yana Larson]

You are welcome! 😇

[Tom]

Gotta luv and admire a silver haired lady, has class and can hold it in any company, age no barrier, looks good on any head as this fine poem illustrates...

Brilliant!!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Tom for a lovely review, much appreciated!!!
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

Exactly. Beautifully written.

[Betty Hermelee]

thank you Ken for a lovely review🌷
warmly, B

[Dave W.]

Quite extraordinary with silver hair out of the ordinary, thankyou for sharing this, it was a good read.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Dave, much appreciated!!!
Warmly, B

[Dave W.]

Of course, have a great day

[Tumi]

a strong advice, we should always be proud of who we are regardless of age, tribe, race, likes, status

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your kind review Tumi
Warmly, B

[John the Baptist]

I never complain about my silver hair. I've seen too many guys younger than me with none at all.

[Betty Hermelee]

thanks John, however, middle school????
That's pretty young!!!
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have silver hair...and told someone at our grocery store today that I wondered if he would card me if I bought cigarettes.
He said their new rules might tell him he has to. So, I told him I was really 20 years old but had an ID that said I was 74.
Yes, if it is inherited be Proud.
I am happy I still have my hair...no matter what color.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you J.....you can dye it, but actually it was quite beautiful!
Warmly, B