dear Betty... your poetry is Deep as we weep for the World to become one...
the silence and darkness has become a place where the Waves of new beginnings will mend the broken Borders of Harmony. softly, Pat
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Thank you dear Pat for your gentle poetic review!
Warmly, B
Its a good a good read love your choice of words makes one wonder, great imagery with flow love the ending, how can one melt ice accept on a beach., lol thank you for sharing.
what a captivating vignette. i like the pinky to pinky bit, it reveals so much about the relationship between the personae. but then there is an unexpectedly dark turn. the mood is suddenly dimmed and cold. i kept seeing this image of a loving couple, but both are weirdly quiet. maybe something has happened? we don't find out.
it's a great drama, the writing is also polished. i'm left feeling a tad unsettled but i'm glad i came across this.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
i just remembered you're from NC. this poem makes sense now. my condolences. i've also lived through.. read morei just remembered you're from NC. this poem makes sense now. my condolences. i've also lived through a natural disaster.
Wow! Your last line just ties a silent bell and whistles on your write here Betty.
And I did have to read it again because I interrupted myself by coughing before I had done.
Obscurity to me sounds like an ideal and not a punishment, but different strokes for different folks and all that. We all like our own favourite flavours, yet we don't banish Dr Pepper drinkers, because they can make up their own mind up to pretend it's not disgusting and a sin against nature, but getting back yo the point..... yes, obscurity... not everyone will be looking for a brochure to book up their holidays there, but where would you get such a brochure? 😃
Which reminds me... must take my bucket and spade to fix any of those lopsided sandcastles!
What is hell for most would be heaven to me!
First order of business would be to erect a welcome to Obscurity sign, with the tagine "blah!"
😃
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
thank you Lorry for your generous review!
warmly
B🌷
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..