A DAY OFF

in between....

I am somewhat energized by a virtuous night’s sleep

I have made my decision to go visit my soldier as soon as possible

though, since today is Sunday, I shall give myself a treat and stroll through the park across the way and  pinch myself to be calm and peaceful

ti’s a sunny day as I peek through my curtains

I look to see what people are clothed in for my outfit

no overcoats or sweaters

I decide to wear a comfortable dress

I can fit into most of my clothes, yet I dare not purchase anything new now because I am still without obvious show

 

After my breakfast and a quick chat with my hostess

I am on my way with lunch in hand to the park

I exit the building  and a cool breeze greets me

to breathe in the various scents which elevate my spirit

today I am free of burden

considering all that I have endured

I shall not dwell on anything adversely

the trees, the grass, the birds, and the bees are mine to enjoy

I find a shaded path to stroll

the air smells like honeydew, everything is green

except for the roses of many colors

little creatures like bunnies, squirrels , pigeons surround me

I am truly in heaven

there is so much to savor, it is delightful

at once, my belly grumbles, a signal I must eat

the cook at the hotel packs me a sardine sandwich

some small sweet pickles, chips, and a chocolate cookie

I continue to walk until I see a vacant picnic bench

the one I choose is in the shade with an appealing view

 

When I finish my lunch, I stroll back towards the hotel

soaking up all the activity around me and feeling quite

content with myself

I truly need this day to settle for the big event tomorrow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading
Series: "AT BRIDGES END"

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I read this and thought, "what a perfect few hours spent, going to the park, enjoying the flora and fauna, having lunch and returning." It sounds like a great day in the city. (I might forgo the sardines. Chicken salad is more my style) A very nice read. I think I feel a dose of calm coming on.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Sam, glad you enjoyed it🌷
Warmly, B

[andrew mitchell]

It’s funny this poem reads like a walk in the park, just smooth flowing with that calm ambience. Nice one Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Andrew for a lovely review
Warmly, B

[Tumi]

a day off
a day to smile and relax
a beautiful poem

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for a lovely review
Warmly B🌹

[Tumi]

you are welcome :)

[JD Major]

Vividly descriptive, stimulates the five senses.
I love how she positively-mindfully calms and 'clears' herself for her big day!
Enjoyable :)

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you JD, much appreciated!
Warmly, B

[Marie]

I love this very sensible lady in your amazing poem, dear Betty. She is a very practical lady and it is wonderful that she enjoyed a good night's rest and sleep before going to visit her beloved next day. Her journey through the park is idyllic and she finds peace in being surrounded by Mother Nature and all the adorable little animals. She enjoyed her lunch and the stroll before heading back to reality again to face the big day tomorrow. Intriguing series, dear Betty. A truly sweet and adorable write. I can't wait to read the next installment!!! PH won't allow me beyond Page 2 of your wonderful poetic works! I am delighted to be able to catch up today. Thank you so very much for sharing your beautiful poetry, dear Betty. Love it...

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Marie for a thoughtful review! don't get why you can't read back to beginning...read moreThank you so much Marie for a thoughtful review! don't get why you can't read back to beginning...
I will send you a message to catch you up!
Again thank you!
warmly, B

[Betty Hermelee]

will message you!

[Marie]

Thank you so very much, Betty...

[Poetic Beauty]

It sounds like nature, the fresh air and a bit of sunshine was exactly what this woman needed to calm her mind and enliven her spirit before seeing her soldier the next day. She leaves worry for tomorrow and enjoy the moment.

My mind wanders with all the possibilities that tomorrow will bring for this dear lady. This story keeps me coming back for more each time I read it.

[Betty Hermelee]

I hope so! Thank you PB for your astute review, love it🌷
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome.

[Thomas W Case]

Excellent. I'm glad you are recharged.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Thomas, much appreciated; remember the protagonist is speaking, not me….🌷
Warmly, B

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Betty… so this is how a Star is born… almost a “play on words”. Having given Birth twice myself in Situations .. I am emotionally entwined and absolutely feel her emotions of feeling blessed about creating a Child; however, it is as difficult as painting a Masterpiece. gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes indeed Pat! Always a pleasure to read your work
Warmly, B🌹

[alexAlexander]

You gave the epitome of "A Day Off" and enjoyed it.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Alex your kind review!
Warmly
B🌹

[alexAlexander]

U.R. Welcome...

[Patricia]

I have been away too long B... am I coming in late for this story or at the beginning? If I am late where do I start?

[Betty Hermelee]

So good to have you back at the Cafe, ; and thank you always for your reviews!
PS I will find where to start and message you…🌹
Warmly, B

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear P. I have your email…. I will send you the first short 43 episodes… I’d like your feedback anyway
Warmly, B🌷

[Patricia]

that would be awesome! Thank you B! you are the best!