A HELPING HAND

and so it goes....

The hostess embraces me until

I impede my weep

Subsequently, we gaze at each other

Silence

She swabs my cheeks with a hanky

Still unaware of my issues

And leads me to a room which is her private office.

 

She graciously pours me a cup of tea

We sit opposite

I profusely apologize for my behavior

She reveals an understanding appearance

Silence

She listens keenly

I shall not repeat my manners on the ship, unnecessary

I inform her about my injured soldier

In addition, he is unaware that I am with child

I clarify that I am uneasy about our impending meeting

And how he may respond  

Our absence has been quite long

And I fear for his condition

I have virtually no emotional support

The doctor who confirmed my pregnancy

Wishes to see me monthly

A tear or two still falls upon my cheek

 

When I end my harangue, she has a faint smile

On her face

I catch myself with a grin  and sense that she understands

My troubles

She invites me to

stay as long as necessary

At a reduced rate

For the first time in months, I am less ruffled

Less winded, and do indeed have a helping hand

I thank her for her empathy and kindness

And proceed upstairs to my room

At once, my mind coasts back and forth

Regarding the visit to my soldier

And revealing my condition

This must happen soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

SERIES: AT BRIDGES END

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful tale shared dear Betty. We do need the kindness of others. This is a tempting story my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Good writing friend. You have penned each and every moment in this poem. Great

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you TP for generous review
Warmly, B

[Weeping willow]

Charming story thank you for sharing these stories ;-] Sorry I'm not always around to read.

[Betty Hermelee]

Of course, and you're very welcome, no apologies
Warmly, B

[Dave Brown]

it is especially gratifying to know that under your most recent circumstances you are finally feeling less ruffled
It it such a horrid feeling.
Do you have no family members wherever that could give you whatever support possible.
Unfortunately, life can have its trials.
i am wondering if you should give your soldier a hint of your major issue.
sort of slide him into it instead of just dropping a major bombshell
But then what do I know about being pregnant.
Keep sipping that tea (what brand??)

[Betty Hermelee]

It has to be a bombshell!!! or else the story is boring!
Thank always friend
Warmly BESTB

[Akinlolu]

Dear Betty. I can't imagine this story is still on! This is an experience one can't forget. I must say this is a rollercoaster ride. A real adventure

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes, It's still on and revving up!!!
Thank you for your kind review
Warmly, B

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A great continuation on the unfolding story. I enjoyed.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Fabian, much appreciated!
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

The emotions are so raw and real in this story. This poor woman bursts into tears in the hotel without every meaning to. I’m so glad the hotel manager lends and listening ear and a kind heart.

What’s to come next when she see her soldier and tells him of the news?

Great write in this series as always!!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much PB, means a lot to me,great review!
Warmly,
B

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty… many a Soldier has a Lady in Waiting”… the Baby will take what the baby needs from your body.. so you must seek nourishment for you and your child… softly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your help for this poor woman...we'll see, maybe she will get help......!
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

Your visual sets a very fine scene, Betty. Seems you already have a friend at hand - always needed in an 'hour of need'. Your writing sends messages to me. Read us, read on! I will, as ever will.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you dear EM! we'll see what transpires very soon....
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks for your message, Betty.

[Pete]

and so tension mounts. you'd make a good soap opera writer.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Pete, it’s definitely turning into one…. The best is yet to come!,,,
Warmly, B