NEW FRONTIERS

journey on...

The cab ride invigorates me

Bustling streets thick with people

Shoulder to shoulder

Many with briefcases

Others with backpacks

Stylish women coiffed flawlessly

Men with hats and brims

Long trench coats

Plenty with umbrellas

Rain must be frequent

Ornate buildings

Some with statuettes

Others with gold leaf trim

Circular streets with grand marble sculptures

Quite different from home

 

I realize the British drive on the left

The cab driver cautioned me

To be mindful of crossing the streets

Quite a few fashionable shops long the sidewalks

I shall take advantage if time permits

And buy a new dress to meet my soldier love

 

Suddenly my face droops, my head bows

My stomach embarks on a bumpy ride

My hands clammy

It must be a return to reality

I simply dread my life at this moment

All scattered and not in a neat little pile

Where do I begin from here?

The ship was so uncomplicated

Except for the affair, yet that is over

So undemanding and accommodating

Hence, I find myself  in a strange country

Utterly lost and alone once more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Photo by Wallpaper Cave
SERIES: "AT BRIDGES END"

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

Wonderful London with its "sidewalks" which made me smile, yes a truly different experience for those not used to our English ways .
She would have been surprised if not a little overawed at the sights of this old city.
Has to be brave tho' and carry on ..

[AYVID N]

Such a fabulous description of London of a bygone age.
Your words appeal so much to the traveler in me. I wish to cross the sea of time and be with her in that moment of discovery of a new country. Inspite of all the anxiety, it would still be so exciting!
Yet one must not forget she's very worried about her state and how things shape up for her.

" The ship was so uncomplicated
Except for the affair, yet that is over
So undemanding and accommodating"

~ These lines were very telling of her state of mind. Reading on with much interest and anticipation!

[Betty Hermelee]

you are amazing!! I love your reviews!!!
Happy everyday!!! you're my inspiration!
Warmly, B

[Papaya]

This is connected to the story / poem I read earlier.
I have to agree with Neville's comment before me. You're a great writer.
The way you lead the reader is wonderfully captivating.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Ana, for your lovely review; I’m honored!
Warmly, B

[Papaya]

You're very welcome 💙 🙂

[Neville]

.. You write like a writer writes .. You have such an eloquent style that is so unique and so very Betty Hermelee .. I shall always be a fan .. Just remember, what side of the road we drive over here .. I got caught out once over there on my way out of New Orleans .. Best .. Neville :)

[Betty Hermelee]

Aw…what a lovely and complimentary review Neville
Thank you immensely
Warmly, B

[Neville]

because ya worth it .. & warmly back at you :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I can feel the trepidation in the heart of the traveler. Very nicely wrought. I enjoyed this.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Fabian for a fine review
Warmly
B.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

I can feel the energy of the crowd and the sense of disorientation mingled with anticipation.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your fine review!
This is part of a series called “ At Bridges End”
Many short episodes like this one
Warmly, B

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

'At Bridges End' sounds intriguing series with its short episodes..
I'll definitely be looking forward to reading more🤗.

[Betty Hermelee]

That’s very sweet of you!
Warmly
B.

[June bug]

You write with wonderful imagery,
I would love to Great Britian one day. I probably just spelled that wrong.
Anyways, love this piece.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you June Bug for a fine review
This piece is in a series called "At Bridges End"
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, Betty I love this , yes new frontiers, you have a way of bringing words together but have meaning with great flow. But this write takes what the reader see, don't feel bad if your view isn't what he saw but your work that made him or her Change and that's poetry

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for a fine review Mauricio!
Warmly, B

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Great depiction of London city.
I love how you go through the details and differences.
Hope she finds her soldier boy... Sounds like a good love story.
Really like the writing, great work.
Keep it up, take good care.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you very much for a lovely review
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

The story continues beautifully. I am now officially intrigued. What will happen now.?

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Ken, intrigued? Well my brain has to tell what’s next, stay tuned, and thank you for your kind review
Warmly, B