FLYING WITH THE STARS

cruising on a riverboat

FLYING WITH THE STARS

 

I fly high above a blue ocean deep

With excitement in my core

Overnight with brilliant stars

Potentially a sonorous sleep

 

When my crusty eyes unfold

I gaze outside the window

To the sun’s eyes peek

It is dawn I am told

 

Now I am afar

from all those I love

on a river ship we sail

I hope to eat some caviar

 

I will be back soon

On the next round of the full moon

 

CIAO my dear Café friends!

Reviews

[Akinlolu]

A journey full of excitement. Yet, it brings separation. Good thing is the separation isn't necessarily forever. When you're coming back from this journey, bring back some goodies... couple of warm memories, new lessons learned and new inspiration to share.
I'd never journeyed on a river or am expanse of water before. But I salute those who have no such phobia like mine, I say live it up. Best regards from me.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Akin.... loved the voyage and the countries.... all post communist... some economically suffering....
Warmly, B

[Soyam]

Sometimes... it's important to isolate yourself, to know your inner self ✨

Will be missing you and your works too...

Enjoy 🤗☺

[Betty Hermelee]

I have returned!!! Great journey...and Thank you for your review!
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

Have a nice holiday break Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm back Ken; thanks for your comments!
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

Lucky lady and a wondeful poem too bott.

[Ken Simm.]

I don't know what bott meant dear Betty. Perhaps if I re review. Stunning may be the word I'm looking for.

[Betty Hermelee]

Why thank you, my friend
Warmly,
B

[Mauricio Montoya]

this is art in words thank you for sharing

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your kind words! I have returned!!!
Warmly, B

[Lorry]

Hoped you wished upon a star and have the experience of a lifetime Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm BACK!!! and still alive! Thank you Lorry for your kind wishes!
Warmly, B

[peter Charlesworth]

Have a glorious time on your fligh/ river cruise
I hope that you will return with tales of places far away

[Betty Hermelee]

I have returned...thank you for your good wishes!
Warmly, B

[peter Charlesworth]

hope that you are returning refreshed; with many new experience's to write about

I am now looking for a publisher for my first book

[Ken e Bujold]

enjoy the cruise Betty. May your waves be gentle and the wake's wash as gentle as the moon beams

ken

[Betty Hermelee]

I have returned form a wonderful journey Ken.
Thanks for your good wishes
Warmly, B

[AYVID N]

How exciting to read this! Yes, fly with the stars, dear Betty. Enjoy yourself on the lovely cruise.

[Betty Hermelee]

Indeed I saw many stars; a fulfilling journey Divya... places that I have not seen and quite interesting... glad to be back at the Cafe... will get caught up in time
Hugs,B

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

A beautiful exploration of adventure, longing, and the joys of reuniting with loved ones.

[Betty Hermelee]

I have returned! Thank you for your lovely comments
Warmly, B

[D. Mansfield]

Hope your cruise was fun, thank you for the invite, lol

[Betty Hermelee]

I have returned! Twas a wonderful cruise to places unknown to me before.
Warmly, B

[William Michael Reeves]

Would that be a super moon by any chance. I hope you find inspiration on the cruise. Be sure the captain knows you can't run a ground. You've got poetic pals to get back to. Bon voyage Betty!!

[Betty Hermelee]

Hello WM, I am back ; a fine journey to interesting countries... new to me; thank you for your good wishes!
Warmly, B

[William Michael Reeves]

Where'd you go? Perhaps you followed in the footsteps of your heroine to Bridge's End? Maybe even met a sailor on the way 😇!