DISENTANGLED

DISENTANGLED

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
"

a break up of sorts

"

 


DISENTANGLED


Well, after the gentleman walks me to my cabin

I weep for hours

blame myself for the initial invitation

to my table at dinner a few nights past

tis all a mistake

that I permit him to enter my space

how foolish am I? What is my logic?

how shall I possibly address this?

 

As I slowly remove my clothing

hang up my satin dress, pull off my petticoat

pluck off my stockings and tug off my shoes

I begin to muse about how to disentangle myself

from the gentleman

simply cannot allow this to proceed

I am engaged to be married to my darling soldier

and see fit to keep my mind and soul on him

not on some strange gentleman

Who happens to fancy me

And me to him (only momentarily)

 

Forthwith I have a plan

tomorrow eve I shall disregard dinner

therefore, he may figure out

that I am not attentive to him

and if he knocks on my door I shall not respond

I do feel a bit shallow about this plan

yet I must be proper and forthright in my decision

 

I sense my weary eyes are half open

after all the sobs and sniffles

nonetheless these tears encourage me

To build my case

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2023 Betty Hermelee


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not an easy situation to unwind. she's all knotted-up and needs houdini to get out of this one ... :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

10 Months Ago

Dear Pete, you know she unravels a bit later on….thank you my friend for your loyalty and fine rev.. read more
dearest Betty… you are an Artist of words and feelings… wishing you days of Wonderment as Lights twinkle on the Trees of Christmas blessings… 2023 …. Softly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Pat, Christmas blessings to you!
Warmly, B
A couple of assumptions here that are most likely to fly in pieces in the face of concrete reality. What if this gentleman is like a bulldog who won't let go easily? What if the attraction between this two actors get out of hand? What if he has a few tricks up his sleeves in his quest to get the woman he fancies by all means? What if?
Well, I'd like to see how this plays out.
Akinlolu

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

ME TOO!!! its' all in my head!!!! Thank you for all of your "what ifs"..... any of those could come .. read more
Akinlolu

1 Year Ago

You are always welcome.
Hmmm...sounds like wishful thinking that will never come to light because there is something special about this gentlemen, she just won't admit it...outloud. : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

I'm BACK! glad to be at the Cafe once more; We'll see about the outcome of her madness!!! Thanks for.. read more
Hello Betty, the guilt is starting to get to her. What a to do. When that magnet attracts, it can be mighty difficult to pull yourself away. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your holiday is going well. Best regards dear poet.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

I've returned dear Chris and had a lovely journey...glad to be back at the Cafe!!! And thank you for.. read more
Seems I need to visit more often, have lost the thread so, please keep the kettle hot, will return!


Seems even the strongest character can disentangle self when the spirit turns its back, be it this lady or indeed either gender. How is she going to free herself from the situation and remain true to self and more importantly. her darling. How would the stranger behave it were he in her shoes. Or, would he consider himself beyond reproach? I wonder about the future, here, Betty! . Come what may, your story telling is incredible, am hooked. (must catch up however - and will)

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Welcome home, hope you had a great time full of interesting sights and fascinating conversations wit.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Of Course! hugs, B
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Waving over the miles and smiling. :)
Her guilt is palpable. For a second I thought he was on the room when she began to disrobe. I'm all caught up on 'Bridge's End'. I like how detailed you are in the telling. I feel like I know everyone, even though they seem to be nameless. I'm trying to think back if you named anyone? Wouldn't that be something if it turns out her betrothed soldier happens to know the gentleman passenger. She shouldn't weep, for she is human.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you WH for a fantastic review! I did name her a while back, but can’t remember it! See you w.. read more
The determination to maintain their commitment and make a proper decision, even though they feel a bit shallow about their plan.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review
Warmly, B
I am assuming her soldier is either actually laying his body on the line or willing to do do, to be willing to die for his country (and his woman) and his willingness to commit the ultimate sacrifice is rewarded with little other than either serious thoughts of, or actual unfaithful sexual activity with another (or perhaps just any other??)!
I will admit to have missed a few chapters but if I have interpreted the situation correctly, it seems, at least on the surface, to be very shallow conduct indeed!!!!!
BESTB

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Well Dave , we’ll see what becomes of the gentleman and the soldier as well; I am off to Eastern .. read more
Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

Just had some friends come back from Croatia
Beautiful area
Have a jolly time
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

I'm BACK! Great trip to Eastern Europe!!! interesting history and people as well.... see ya around!!.. read more
How quickly those flames ignite. Sometimes very difficult to do the right thing. Very thought provoking poem, thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you for stopping by and a lovely review….
Warmly, B

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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