THE ROAR,THE SQUEAL

THE ROAR,THE SQUEAL

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
"

a call to mate

"

THE ROAR, THE SQUEAL

 

The great beast roars to deafen ears

as it echoes through

the Kenyan landscape

yet it is merely

a love call to his mate

 

When my mate squeals

for attention and wants

to be near me

touch me, hold me

discover the consummate place

yet it is merely a love call to a fervent dawn

 


© 2023 Betty Hermelee


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Betty Hermelee
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dearest Betty... the softness of Roars in Kenya begins when the Sun rises and ends with the setting of the Sun. There is a Natural environment to seduce the Wild and Bold Romantic Souls. softly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


Betty Hermelee

5 Months Ago

Thank you dear Pat for a lovely review
Warmly, B🌹
Beautiful poem, thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

than you for your kind words..
Warmly, B
Love in the wild! Love is wild. And definitely roars in the beginning, then in time purrs. I would describe this poem as exciting. Watch those claws when the safari is over and you get back to the tent!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, a fine review WH…. See you in a while
Warmly, B
We were created to love and be loved.
Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Melinda, much appreciated!
Warmly, B
Beautiful and romantic! I love it. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Sharon, glad you enjoyed it.
Warmly, B
The call and the answering of it in the animal kingdom seems so simple and we humans complicate it, but writing of it like this there is no mistake. Well done, powerful in so few lines. Love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

A very thoughtful review P….glad you liked it!
Warmly, B
Communication, often misunderstood by those outside and at times by those inside the circle. It is these misunderstandings and understandings that make or break relationships. Good write Betty

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thanks Soren for a thoughtful review, much appreciated
Warmly, B
They look so cute like kitty cats (ha). I love that you use art as inspiration.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Norma for your kind review
Warmly, B
The call of the wild ubiquitous throughout nature, to its own kind no more a reminder to bring home the family pride, the poem here a symbol of kindredship and harmony ..

Inspiring 🦁

Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tom for a very fine review...spot on!
Warmly, B
Well okay, but no tickling, not with those claws! Well, unless you want to hear me squeal like a little girl cub 😊
But, and I think this may very well be your point, that we are all animalistic at times. Sometimes it's playful too!
We're not all that different are we? Well, apart from the house, carpets, slippers and broadband connection that is 😊


Posted 1 Year Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Very true Lorry, and a very clever review!
Thank you my friend,
Warmly, B

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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